Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-17276108-20131126163635/@comment-17981840-20131211015726

JessieLoverRxE wrote: Mordorigby wrote: I honestly think it is CJ. I already thought of an ending to this episode:

CJ: I'm waiting...

Rigby: Mordecai, DON'T DO IT! Margaret is the love of your life! Don't blow it! You've only known this girl for about three days. You've known Margaret your entire LIFE!

Mordecai: Me and Margaret are done. What's the point of being in a relationship if one cannot ever see the person they are dating to begin with?

Rigby: Forget this!

(Rigby runs outside)

Mordecai: Alright, CJ, where were we?

CJ: It's about time...

(the two are about to kiss, but all of the sudden, Margaret comes bursting through the front door with Rigby)

Margaret: MORDECAI, STOP!

(everybody looks at Margaret as she comes approaching to Mordecai)

Margaret: What are you doing?! After all we've been through!

Mordecai: Margaret...? What are you-

Margaret: I'm on Christmas break right now. A better question would be what are you doing with this... thing?

Mordecai: I thought I would never see you again. So, I decided it was time to move on.

Margaret: But after all we've been through? (she starts tearing up). Please don't do this! You are the best, and most friendliest guy I have ever met! You are always there for me, you always support me for everything, we both like the same things, we have been through so much together!

(Margaret starts crying as the camera zooms in on Mordecai's face)

Margaret: Mordecai...

(there is a two second silence with suspenseful music)

Margaret: I LOVE YOU!

(Mordecai has a shocked and ashamed expression on his face. He turns to CJ, and then Margaret, who has tears coming out of her eyes. Mordecai sighs)

Mordecai: I'm sorry CJ, I can't do this.

CJ: Why ever not?

Mordecai: Because... (Mordecai turns to Margaret while talking to CJ) I love her as well.

(romantic music starts playing as the two walk up to each other. The two hold each other, and kiss beak-to-beak as the clock turns to 12:00 AM on January 1st.)

CJ (while the two are still kissing) OH COME ON! FORGET THIS, I'M GOING BACK TO COUPLE CORRAL! HAVE FUN WITH YOUR LADY, AND YIPPE-YI-YAY, MORDECAI.

(the episode ends with everybody looking at Mordecai and Margaret still kissing) Umm...

First of all, you made Margaret say 'that thing' when referring to CJ, and that was out of characetr and really mean.

And even while it was mean, no one payed attention to it, instead, Mordecai blew CJ off and told Margaret he loved her back and then they shared a 'special' moment while everyone was wathcing, and no one cared about CJ who left because...why? She was the bad guy for liking Mordecai and Mordecai wanting to kiss her? Play with her feelings?

Another special kiss between Mordecai and Margaret would not be special anymore anyways, it would lose all meaning now.

Margaret was selfish in this story...really selfish, self-absorbed.

Plus, what right did she have to act like he was cheating on her? She was the one who told him she can't be his girlfriend. Meaning, they are NOT together.

Also, it was too regular for Regular Show.

Not trying to be mean here, just trying to help out if you ever decide to write more on RS.

I see some people like the story you made up but..I had to share my honest opinion on it. I believe that people were commending it, not because it would work well for the show and more specifically the episode--although i still think it would work pretty well--I'm pretty sure that they were commending it because it was simply a well written scene.